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gentlehag ([personal profile] gentlehag) wrote2006-07-24 12:32 pm
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Fanart: Hermione Seduces

Title: Hermione Seduces
Artist: [livejournal.com profile] faire_weather
Character: Hermione
Rating: NC-17 (NWS)
Warnings: Full-frontal female nudity. I will not be held responisble for underage viewers. By clicking the cut below, you agree that you are at least 18 years of age and are aware that you will be seeing artistic nudity. Don't say I didn't warn you.
Notes: I didn't use a reference at all for this, so there are a few little problems I'm sure. Her right hand, especially, looks a bit awkward. If anyone can see what the hell I did wrong with it, and can help me fix it, I'd love you forever. Hermione is over 18 years of age in this picture.

Teaser:








Full-size version HERE.

Thanks. Comments, crits etc. are very welcome.


--FaireWeather

[identity profile] avialle.livejournal.com 2006-07-24 06:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, great piece! :^D What medium did you use?

As far as the right hand, yeah, that kind of perspective is tricky . . . I'd say the the middle and index fingers are too short, need to be drawn out a bit more. The foreshortening on the legs is fab, though! It's really, REALLY good for not having a model of any kind! Trust me, I know the anatomical woes of not having a good reference to work off of . . . :^(

[identity profile] zeitgeistic.livejournal.com 2006-07-26 03:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Just tablet and photoshop. I drew on screen. Thanks for the tips. :)

[identity profile] emeraldstag.livejournal.com 2006-07-25 07:31 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely job! I thought her hair came out great.

A nice sultry pose for Hermione. =)

[identity profile] zeitgeistic.livejournal.com 2006-07-26 03:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! I'm esp. proud of the hair meself.

[identity profile] leviathan0999.livejournal.com 2006-07-25 08:46 pm (UTC)(link)
This is just a gorgeous picture. I see what you mean about the right hand, and it's a perspective problem. That hand is viewed as by an eyeball on the floor, while the rest of Hermione is viewed from about eye-level. You need to find a way to look at a hand leaning on the floor from about three or four feet in the air, and maybe six feet away, I think, to get finger-lengths right.

[identity profile] zeitgeistic.livejournal.com 2006-07-26 03:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Exactly! God, I'm an idiot. No wonder...alright, I am all over this. I'm about to go edit it now. Thanks to you so much.

[identity profile] leviathan0999.livejournal.com 2006-07-26 03:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey, you give me a Hermione that looks that touchable, I'll do whatever I can to help her look like she can touch me! ;^)

[identity profile] coell.livejournal.com 2006-07-26 02:26 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, that's beautiful! It's the hair I'm very very impressed with. For con-crit, I'd say that her nipples wouldn't be centered in each breast as you have them. They should be farther apart, each one closer to it's side's arms. With her shoulder rolled forward to have her hands between her legs, the outer edges of her breasts would be partially covered by arm and squeezed tight enough to have the connected lines of center cleavage.

[identity profile] zeitgeistic.livejournal.com 2006-07-26 03:10 pm (UTC)(link)
homg. Your icon scared me.

Nipples have never been my thing. I've always covered them with hands/locks of hair/shadows, etc. They never look good to me. But I will go back and 'adjust' them a bit. I hope they don't come out looking like lazy eyes.

[identity profile] coell.livejournal.com 2006-07-26 05:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Don't be scurred -- my nostrils will never hurt you. When in doubt, paint the nipples on new layers and then you can move them around all you like. Here's an example: http://homepage.mac.com/coell/lj/gifts/faire_hermione.jpg -- as you can see, just a couple pixels is enough.

[identity profile] zeitgeistic.livejournal.com 2006-07-26 08:36 pm (UTC)(link)
ooh, you're a goddess. I'll do that. Ta so much.

And I won't be scurred if you give me a hurg.

[identity profile] dio-elaclaire.livejournal.com 2006-07-26 05:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice *___* I love the way you drew her hair and the coloring is very nice, too. Her facial expression simply asks for a kiss. I think there's something wrong with her breasts, they don't seem natural, but I like the picture a lot :)

[identity profile] zeitgeistic.livejournal.com 2006-07-26 08:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, [livejournal.com profile] coell told me the nipples needed to be closer to her arms. I'll fix that immediately. Thanks!