Con-crit Post - Haute Allure

My do_me_veela fic posted this morning. :D

I was inspired by firethesound's constructive criticism post that she did at the end of All Our Secrets Laid Bare. I know fests are special and not really the place for less-than-positive feedback about fics, but I'd like to know if there are areas where I can improve for the next fic.

So, if you read this fic and had any con-crit-y thoughts, this post is open for you, and I will not feel sassy or upset with anyone who offers such. Don't feel bad about it—you'd be doing me a favour.

And if you didn't read the fic or don't care etc., then feel free to skip right over this post. :3

Title: Haute Allure @ do-me-veela
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 12,500
Summary: Harry is famous for his menswear now. Malfoy is the inside leg that he loves running his tape measure up.
Warning(s): None
Beta: The inestimable eidheann_writes, with super great help from icmezzo and traintracks.
Disclaimer: This piece of art or fiction is based on characters and situations created and owned by JK Rowling, various publishers including but not limited to Bloomsbury Books, Scholastic Books and Raincoast Books, and Warner Bros. Inc. No money is being made, no copyright or trademark infringement, or offence is intended. All characters depicted in sexual situations are above the age of consent.
Authors Notes: Includes 1 reference to Mean Girls. I’m not ashamed. This was inspired by London Fashion Week, which starts February 14th! :D